I'm trying to get the sketch phase done but I'm having some difficulty. The Primid seems fine, but the Hammer Bro is going at too many opposing angles and looks completely wrong. I think the root of the problem lies in his shell. Perhaps if I reoriented it, I could straighten out the situation. Feedback (on any aspect) would be greatly appreciated to help me progress further on this. Thanks.
The position you've chosen is a difficult one to pull off, the reason is, to make this picture look better, you'd have to hide the hammer bro's head by putting him right a little more.
I'd suggest changing the angle of view, maybe more of a 45 degree angel rather then the 25 / 15 degree you've gone for, it'll make seeing the hammer brother easier and also make the picture show a bit more of both their features. Other then that, It's a great picture as always, love to see more of these two.
<em>"you'd have to hide the hammer bro's head by putting him right a little more"</em>
You mean make his head vertically aligned with the Primid's head? I don't know if I want to do that. Their hips are already closely aligned, and since the Primid is standing upward at an angle and the Hammer Bro is laying down flat, the heads probably shouldn't be vertically aligned. (I'm assuming they're equal size, by the way.) However, I'll play with my sketch and try your suggestion to see how it actually looks.
<em>"maybe more of a 45 degree angel rather then the 25 / 15 degree you've gone for"</em>
I'd say it's already pretty close to 45°. In fact, it seems like a big portion of the problem here is that I drew my Hammer Bro at something close to 45°, while my Primid is more like 25°. I actually have a bad habit of drifting to an "easy" angle like that, which is probably the core of what is wrong here. The bottom line is that I want the Primid at this angle so you can see the cock/ass jamming easier. Also, I really don't want to redraw the whole thing again right now. I've already worked through multiple outline sketches.
Now that I'm thinking about changing the Hammer Bro's primary angle (both horizontally <em>and</em> vertically), I actually think it may fall into your original suggestion about moving the Hammer Bro's head to the right. I'll play around with him and see what I can do. Thanks for the input and the support. =}
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I'm trying to get the sketch phase done but I'm having some difficulty. The Primid seems fine, but the Hammer Bro is going at too many opposing angles and looks completely wrong. I think the root of the problem lies in his shell. Perhaps if I reoriented it, I could straighten out the situation. Feedback (on any aspect) would be greatly appreciated to help me progress further on this. Thanks.
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I'd suggest changing the angle of view, maybe more of a 45 degree angel rather then the 25 / 15 degree you've gone for, it'll make seeing the hammer brother easier and also make the picture show a bit more of both their features. Other then that, It's a great picture as always, love to see more of these two.
You mean make his head vertically aligned with the Primid's head? I don't know if I want to do that. Their hips are already closely aligned, and since the Primid is standing upward at an angle and the Hammer Bro is laying down flat, the heads probably shouldn't be vertically aligned. (I'm assuming they're equal size, by the way.) However, I'll play with my sketch and try your suggestion to see how it actually looks.
<em>"maybe more of a 45 degree angel rather then the 25 / 15 degree you've gone for"</em>
I'd say it's already pretty close to 45°. In fact, it seems like a big portion of the problem here is that I drew my Hammer Bro at something close to 45°, while my Primid is more like 25°. I actually have a bad habit of drifting to an "easy" angle like that, which is probably the core of what is wrong here. The bottom line is that I want the Primid at this angle so you can see the cock/ass jamming easier. Also, I really don't want to redraw the whole thing again right now. I've already worked through multiple outline sketches.
Now that I'm thinking about changing the Hammer Bro's primary angle (both horizontally <em>and</em> vertically), I actually think it may fall into your original suggestion about moving the Hammer Bro's head to the right. I'll play around with him and see what I can do. Thanks for the input and the support. =}